What poemsykrmatique postedLittle skip stalls There Aborted in the craning The shy whirl cycles dreamily To the ground Wondering if the decay could sashay back up from slump Grappling overtly at the space in the tin can She cheats from reasoning from wisdom Encumbered what care Rhubarb If tigers tasted of Rhubarb Then I like rip et mt Chest stretched out She strings the last rise Churning Sponsored Link-------------------------- Me : ) repliedIt's different form your other one. Changed and added to it a? remember hp repliedabsurdicusly superfluous Due 12/28/08 <3 repliedgood. I like that it doesn't rhyme and that the structure varies. usually I end up opening these questions and rolling my eyes. teedee repliedum like what? im confused. but...nah, i cant think of anything good to say. i guess its extremely creative. like EXTREMELY. very good use of a free verse. very good example.
um right now, i keep thinking the poem is about a washing machine. cause i just read a question about it. haha. :) |
